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Bailey Holcomb

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Drop Of Life

    I liked it, Sarah. The thing that I didn't find was the rhythm. I might be wrong, but when I read it, I didn't find it. Who is she ? ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Kiss

    Honestly, I liked it. I love repetition and imagery. In the first stanza, you made me feel like I was in the move Alice In Wonderland . I loved that. ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Secret Place

    I liked this poem! Very well written I must say! To me, it seems a little mysterious. That is what I like in a poem. A dramatic, mysterious, cautious type ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Snow

    I love the repetition and the similes! VERY GOOD! I love the free verse and the "swamp mud" I think is what you said. I love it! I wish I ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Darkness

    I personally really like this poem. It isn't what I often read and it shows a lot of feeling. It seems really dramatic, but in a very fascinating way. I ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Forever

    Hey! This is good. I like the free verse in it and I honestly wish I could write such details as these! I am trying new things because quatrains tend ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You Are Loved

    Okay. Iam not exactly sure what to critique in this poem. I'm so sorry. Ihave not learned a lot about how to correct little things in every poem. I wish ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You're wrong, Teacher.

    Okay I liked this. I'm sorry, but I don't know the meaning to have of the words you have used. Which, really that should be a compliment because I have ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The One I Love

    Hello. I loved your poem. It was sooooo sweet!!! I often write about guys, well, a certain guy, that I have gone out with. I recently started writing and yet ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter one of my werewolf story (need title)

    I know it may not seem like it, but I wrote this poem a while back. "My Love For You" was written when we were still together and I was ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If I Had Another Drink

    I liked your poem. It made sense and yet you didn't give too much information. That is mainly what I do. I look in the mirror and start talking and ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do You?

    Thank you for your feedback. Now the reason I don't always tell exactly what is going on is that I don't want to tell a lot about it most of ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: through it all

    I may be one of the few people [ or so it seems] to review this poem. Even though this may be true, I like it very much so. It ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just The Way I Like It

    Wow! I can't believe that! That is an amazing point of your opinion. It is unusual that I read things like these. Although I like my stanzas, I like your ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Him

    I liked your poem. It's pretty. Short, but Pretty. I usually write poems based on guys [well a certain guy that ,stupidly, I dumped.] and they end up turning out ...

    Dec 16, 2008


“And how shall I think of you?' He considered a moment and then laughed. 'Think of me with my nose in a book!”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell